definition
May 13, 2009
late night one day, i’ve realized something..
and i’m happy now i can define it,
this thing called love.
for me,
love is not to own,
neither to possess
rather,
to love is to give the best
to pray for his/her best
even if it might mean to not always be with us,
because fate has set it, destiny has written it,
we humans can’t change it.
if we really understand love,
it wont be a problem to let go..
we love them and want them to be their best..
even if that means away from us..
if we persist, we’re just gonna burden them..
may even irritate them..
intervening with fate,
that has already been written.
we humans don’t know much..
can we see beyond the horizon?
beyond the present?
trust me, everything changes,
we dont know the future
nothing stays the same..
don’t be stubborn,
don’t be persistent,
let it flow..
dissapointing?
no.
unless you don’t understand love…
~Adiguna Bahari 13May09
Great write! I love the reflective feel of this poem, especially how you worked out the presentation of its poetic theme. Nice π
thx!! nice to know you (coz we didnt actually meet)
are u a writer?
how did u happen to set foot on this blog?
lho, ini bukannya udah pernah di post, ya? (di FB)
yep it was
terus koq di-post di sini lagi, gun?
ada apaan, neh?
hehe π
enggk koq, i just thought in fb it might get lost. but its not going to in here..
ow, i c π
“to love is to give the best
to pray for his/her best
even if it might mean to not always be with us,
because fate has set it, destiny has written it,
we humans canβt change it.”
deep and nice π
silly me π
yeaaa,,, deep and nice π
deep meaning with certain conditions, it has different meanings.. right? π
deep meaning with certain conditions ?
bentar..
gw jg jd bngung..
π
GREAT!an honest piece of art…
humans usually cant be honest to their self that we have limitations and boundaries..
hahah da wise harris !
thx a bunch for the conversation! it really switches the light on my mind π
inspirasinya siapa tuh gun?
keren juga,, seandainya emg itu pmahaman semua orang,, pasti arti cinta sesungguhnya bisa pada tau..
inspirasi? tentu banyak orang…
tapi ini definisi yg gw temukan demi tak mw kehilangan lebih banyak orang π
stuju!
Thanks for very nice and meaning poem. You will become a very good man if you understood what you mention in this poem. Your poem change and light up my mind. Thank you.
Could i keep a copy of your poem on my blog? Thank you.
@truc: hohoo.. thx! yea, im trying to stick to this code for the time being..
sure u can! it’d be my pleasure π (just dont forget to write a traceback to here :D)
Wah, pujangga abis nieh Digun.
Kereennn…
waduh, s dimer pake bhs gaib nih.. pujangga tuh apa y?